Aww this is cute. c: Okay well here goes, I'm not fantastic at critiques, but hey, ya know, whatever works. Okay, well first off Pinkie looks freaking adorable in here and the graphics are adorbs. I understand it's your first game, and it's far better then what I could do, so I guess this is like a consumer's point of view. XD The controls when jumping weren't working completely. I didn't really care for the fact that you had to wait until Pinkie was fully in the air to be able to move when jumping. It look me a little while to get out of that gap because I'd jump and gold the arrow key and I'd barely get off the ground and she'd just be stuck in the air. That and the fact that nothing happens when you get to the end and jump off are basically my only complaints. Otherwise, good job! c:
Thank you for the critique! Some of these things, I'm sorry to say, I can't completely control, such as only being able to move in midair. It's just the program I used. (Maybe once I know my way around game-making a little more, I can switch to a better program.) I also think that Pinkie's little lock of hair that springs out in the front makes her much bigger than I intended to, so she can't get out of spaces and things like that. (I should crop her better next time...)
I'll try to improve on the points you mentioned in the next level!